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Tricia meeting Prince Lawrence

Mistaken by chance for a missing princess, Tricia is caught up in a tangle of excitement and danger while hiding her hopeless love for Cordillera’s crown prince. Will the public believe her as the princess as she helps him hunt his missing cousin on the Isle of Capri?

And can she win the heart of Prince Lawrence, who’s destined by custom to marry a titled lady?

Chapter One

Patricia Parker’s heels tapped the marble floor of the foyer as she strolled beneath sparkling chandeliers. Women wearing exotic perfumes glanced her way, too well-mannered to stare. She pretended she looked just as good in her short, black cocktail dress and rhinestones as they did in shimmering gowns and glittering diamonds.

The lights dimmed. Sounds of the orchestra playing the overture to Carmen flowed through open doors. Surprised the small country of Cordillera, nestled against the mountains bordering France, even had an opera house, she hurried past the stragglers disappearing into the main floor of the theater.

“Allysa, wait. I must speak with you.” The deep voice rippled down her spine.

A touch on her arm made her turn to face a man with light brown hair, a well-trimmed beard and a determined chin. She took in his white uniform with gold braids and buttons and the two uniformed bodyguards flanking him. Her gaze moved up past his broad chest to meet deep brown eyes with amber flecks. She gasped.

Could it be?

Even in dim light, Prince Lawrence in the flesh was even better looking than pictures she’d seen on the newsstands at the airport last night. What should she do? Bow? Curtsy? Kiss his hand? His intense look made her feel like a fragile butterfly trying to escape a determined hunter with a net.

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Plotting Made Easy with Post-it Notes

Plotting with Post-it Notes helps you structure your story. Not only does it help keep you focused on where you’re going, but it keeps you from sitting there wondering what to write next. You can see the whole picture of the story, so you can judge if it’s balanced with the major action happening with the main characters, and if you’re writing suspense you have included enough romance along with the danger.

To start, a three-way project cardboard works best, but you can use a large, flat poster board about two and a half feet by three feet. Estimate the number of chapters you’ll write and mark the cardboard off into rectangles, one for each chapter. Mine has room for twenty-four chapters.

Now for the basic plan for the story. Pick your characters, their goals, their positive attributes and flaws. The flaws will be what gets them into trouble and the troubles will challenge them to change as the stakes for not changing grow higher. Their decisions and their strengths are what will help them to act to win their goals and deserve them after all the struggles you put them through. In a romance, both main characters need one trait that will clash with the other and become things they will have to compromise on or learn to live with. It’s best to give each main character an inner conflict that stands in the way of true romance. Little by little, as the story goes on, each main character can resolve the problem to free him or her (or both) for true love.

You need to pick the ending you’ll aim toward. Of course, in romance, it’s the happy ever after. In romantic suspense, you have to catch the bad guys, save the town or situation from disaster, and then give the hero and heroine their happy ever after.

Now get out your Post-it-Notes in several colors. I use pink for the heroine, blue for the hero, orange for the villain or danger, and purple for romance. You could add green or yellow for setting, or use it for an important secondary character. On each note, write a phrase showing what you want to happen. In the first chapter, you’ll want the hero and heroine to meet (or meet again) and be affected by some change that surprises him or her or both and calls for immediate action, something different from what they have been doing. Choose the right time for snippets of backstory, perhaps something one character tells the other about.

Plotting for Double Trouble (not yet published}

Phrases for scenes written on the notes could include: scene showing heroine’s character flaw, scene showing hero’s character flaw, scenes to show her learning flaw is obstacle to goal, scenes to show character realizing flaw is obstacle to winning at love, scene to show she has changed, scenes to show progress of romance such as:
a. First kiss
b. Fondling and caressing
c. Almost love scene
d. Full love scene or more if desired

However, you may find when you are writing the story, the characters may not be ready for a kiss or a love scene, depending on how the heroine and the hero are relating to each other at that time. Historical writer, Emma Merritt, said she was ready to write a love scene, but her hero wouldn’t do it then. If your characters act like that, then move the note to another chapter and continue writing.

Include obstacles to goal, obstacles to romance, and in romantic suspense, dangers to their safety. Make each obstacle harder to overcome than the one before. Western writer, Jack Bickham, (Apple Dumpling Gang) advised letting your character lose each conflict or if he or she wins, add a disappointing complication. That way, the reader will root for the poor heroine or hero. Include the emotion your character feels from setbacks. You can write in disappointment, anger, heartbreak, joy, etc. on the notes, but when you are writing the story, you’ll want to show such emotion by their thoughts and actions without mentioning the emotion itself.

Include the climax near the end when the stakes are high, and let the hero and heroine win this conflict. Include scenes to show each has overcome the flaw so they will be changed persons.

If you have a black moment when all seems lost, put it near the end and show lots of emotion. Then the reader will worry for your characters and cheer when everything comes out all right.

If you’re writing romantic suspense, be sure to include the downfall of the bad guys so the heroine and hero are safe and free to confess their love their love for a happy ever after.

If you write your story scenes and post them on a story board, you won’t wonder what to write next, writing will be easier, and you are more likely to stay focused on what needs to happen next in your story. Also, you’ll be able to see if you’ve balanced the parts of the story so it flows well without spending a lot of chapters on the hero or heroine, when they should be together most of the time.

Carolyn Rae has had eight romantic suspense novels published. Her most recent one is PRETEND PRINCESS, a modern version of the prince and the pauper, where a look-alike, missionary’s daughter is hired to take the place of a missing princess until the real one can be found. Tricia worries she won’t be able to stand in for the princess, but then she falls for the prince, who is supposed to marry a titled lady instead of a commoner.

See below for detailed outline to print and keep for reference.
 
Detailed Outline to copy and print for reference by Carolyn Rae
I. Why Use a Story Board
A. Prompts you what to write about next
B. Helps keep you on track
C. Helps you structure the story and evaluate it
1. Pick when to have first kiss and love scenes
a. You may have to adjust the timing as you write if it doesn’t feel right
2. Aim scenes toward the end, keep action moving in that direction
3. Add “plants” – a gun to be used later, a thematic symbol
4. Position the dark moment if you have one
II. How to Use a Story Board
A. Buy a large white cardboard or 3-way poster board for projects
B. Mark off into chapters
C. Choose characters, goals, flaws and situation to begin story
a. introduce problem in first chapter
D. Decide ending to aim for
E. Buy Post-it Notes in several colors 2X 2 or 3X3
F. I use these colors
1. Pink for heroine
2. Blue for hero
3. Lavender for romance
4. Orange for villain or danger (to romance or characters)
G. Write scenes on each note
a. If lengthy, can set margins to 2 inches, type note, print, then staple to note
1. Write scenes in 1 -3 phrases (mention setbacks and obstacles)
2. Add emotion character feels from setbacks
3. Write scenes to show heroine’s character flaw
4. Write scenes to show her learning flaw is obstacle to goal
5. Write scenes to show her realizing flaw is obstacle to winning at love
6. Write scenes to show she has changed
7. Write scenes mentioned in 3 – 6 for hero
8. Write scenes to show progress of romance
e. First kiss
f. Fondling and caressing
g. Almost love scene
h. Full love scene or more if desired.
9. Write Climax – critical moment, show high stakes if lose
10. Write black moment when everything seems lost (optional)
11. Tie up suspense before you resolve the romance
12. Check the balance of the colors to be sure you have enough scenes of each type – some for hero’s growth, some for heroine’s growth, progress of romance
13. Write resolution
a. Be sure to tie up all loose ends and questions, even if there’s a sequel
H. Judging balance
1. Large amount of one color shows lots of one character’s viewpoint at a time
2. Too little purple shows you haven’t focused enough on the romance

Ragtime Jazz Festival Honors Scott Joplin

April 1st, 2017 is the one-hundred-year anniversary of Scott Joplin’s death. I attended the Mississippi State University Library’s annual Ragtime Jazz Festival featuring music’s transition from ragtime to jazz.

LIke my grandparents, I had a chance to view a silent movie. “Seven Chances” featured Buster Keaton’s hilarious race from 500 prospective brides when he had to marry to receive an inheritance of seven million dollars. Jeff Barnhart accompanied the film with an impassioned piano medley like pianists employed by theaters in the days before “talkies” surfaced.

At the concert that evening, I listened to piano pieces made famous by Jellyroll Morton, Fats Waller, and Scott Joplin played by renowned pianists Jeff Barnhart and Brian Holland. Both have played all over the world.

The five-man jazz band included a piano, trombone, cornet, drums, clarinet, and saxophone. Drums and the piano player’s fingers and furiously tapping foot kept the band rocking the theater. The band leader even played the clarinet and the saxophone during the same number.

What Not to Store in the Refrigerator

 

Joel Marion from Biotrust Nutrition stores these seven foods somewhere else, and here’s why.

1. A banana stops ripening in the refrigerator and may not continue to ripen, so if it’s green and very firm, it may stay that way until it spoils.

2. The starch in a sweet potato will turn to sugar, changing the taste and encouraging weight gain.

3. Tomatoes tend to lose flavor in the refrigerator.

4. Apples lose flavor and texture when refrigerated. However, they do keep longer if refrigerated.

5. Onions can get soggy after a while in the refrigerator and make other foods smell like onions.

6. Avocadoes ripening process is interrupted if put in the refrigerator, so if you want them soft and easy to mash for guacamole, keep them elsewhere.

7. Coffee does not keep better in the refrigerator and may absorb other smells.

So after all that advice, what do you do?

 

The Languages of Love

 

Dr. Gary Chapman speaks at conferences about marriage. His book, The 5 Love Languages: The Secret to Love That Lasts, discusses the different ways couples show their love for each other. I took the quiz, and persuaded my husband of many years to take it also. He grumbled, but complied, then asked why I wanted him to do it. I explained I wanted to be sure I expressed my love in ways that he would appreciate.

So, what are the five languages? I’ll list them in alphabetical order, because others will rate them differently than my husband and I did.

Acts of Service, especially when one partner is stressed, are greatly appreciated by some. Physical touch may be more important to one partner, while Quality Time is valued by another. Receiving gifts pleases some partners, while Words of Affirmation are valued most by others.

Knowing this gives you a double whammy if you read or write romance. You can figure out what pleases your real-life partner and find it in the heroes and heroines in the romances you read and/or write.

 

 

 

New Year’s Resolutions Made Easy

Low-carb Diet, here I come.

It’s January, and like many others, I’m trying to recover from pounds I gained from eating Christmas’s bountiful goodies.

My husband will only try the low-carb diet, so I’m looking forward to lots of sugar-free Jell-O with a dab of Cool Whip or fresh fruit. Oranges, strawberries, blueberries, and raspberries are low-carb. Since my husband has a sweet tooth, I mix one tablespoon of sugar and two packages of Sweet ‘n Low with the berries. For a tasty apple treat, I cut out the seeds, slice an apple onto a plate, sprinkle a mixture of sugar and cinnamon, microwave for two to three minutes, and eat with a toothpick.

Since I hate summer squash and zucchini, and he hates winter squash, and broccoli, we’ve settled on a compromise.  I cook broccoli for me and squash for him. I love spaghetti squash with butter and brown sugar, but that much sugar is a no-no, so I won’t do that.

I found a great recipe for green beans with bacon and cream cheese. I was going to make it tonight when my grandson and his girlfriend come for dinner, but her boss scheduled her to work tonight, putting him on my grandson’s hate list, so I guess it will be next Tuesday before they come.

I’ve been hunting recipes for the non-starchy, allowed vegetables. I don’t care for kale or Swiss chard, but I love spinach. A recipe I developed is listed below. You can also use it to stuff mushrooms.

Creamed Spinach with Mushrooms

2 T dried, minced onion, soak in ¼ cup warm water (or ½ cup chopped fresh onion)

6 large mushrooms. sliced

2 pkgs. frozen spinach (12 oz.), microwave each 5 minutes

¼ cup butter or margarine, cut in cubes and melt in frying pan

1 can cream of mushroom soup, undiluted

1T. flour

¼ tsp. garlic powder

Directions

Soak the onions in a small bowl for ten minutes. Cook spinach in microwave, one package at a time. Let cool. Cook the mushrooms in the melted butter in a large frying pan until slightly browned on each side. Put mushrooms on a plate and add flour, soup, and garlic powder to the butter. Bring to a boil over medium heat while stirring. Cook and stir for one minute until it’s thickened. Squeeze extra water from spinach packages and add spinach and mushrooms to pan and stir. This makes six generous servings, and it will keep and reheat well. If you put the leftovers in the pan in the refrigerator, add a little water and stir before reheating so spinach won’t stick to pan. Or, you can reheat it in the microwave oven.

 

 

 

Goodbye, Sweet Car

My Toyoto Corolla was sick and sluggish at times. I’d be tooling along without any problems until I stopped at an intersection with a Stop sign. Then it was like pushing an elephant to get it to move. Cars behind zipped around me while I jammed my foot on the accelerator. Nothing changed. Then all of a sudden, the engine decided to jerk ahead, and then I was fine–until the next time.

Goodbye Toyota

I was hoping to make it to Sunday School on time when the car just crawled for a whole block. When it finally decided to move faster, I turned around, headed home, and drove my husband’s car to church.

In the meantime, my husband woke up and wanted to go to the donut shop to meet with his cronies that gathered there in the mornings.  He took one look at my car sitting there and decided something must be wrong.

Monday morning, I drove my Toyoto to Jack’s Auto Shop to get it fixed.  Jack, bless his heart, said the transmission was about to go out, and the catalytic converter needed to be replaced before I could pass inspection. He asked if I wanted to spend $3,000 to fix a 14-year-0ld car with 175,00 miles on it.  Not ready to do that, I drove home and had a conference with my husband.

He checked out prices and informed me I could only sell it for $1,500 if I fixed it up. Since we’re both retired, we had planned on downsizing to one car when mine wore out, but I didn’t feel ready to let go.

We could donate it to Cars for Kids, an organization which helped pay to educate teens. I drove by Jack’s and took my last picture.

Then I had an idea. Maybe Carmax would buy it. Sure enough, a phone call confirmed they would probably take a car that old and that sick.

Now, I am counting my blessings. First, I received a $300 check from Carmax. Second, my sweet husband agreed to let me use our other car for all my writer’s meetings as long as he gets to join his cronies for coffee at the donut shop in the mornings. Third, we don’t have to pay for car inspection and registration, and fourth, we can get a refund on our car insurance.

The only catch is we have to remember to pass the extra key back and forth in case one of us forgets and leaves the key in the ignition. I can live with that.